76 Words.
By. Brandon Moore
Red,
Red running down my arms,
Red dripping of my fingers,
Red coming from my blade,
Red is all I see,
Silver,
Silent shades of silver cutting through my flesh,
Silver drawing Red,
Silver going deeper, and deeper.
Pain,
Pain running through my body,
Pain I adore,
Pain I long for,
Pain that somehow feels good.
Black,
Black is all I feel,
Black is all I see,
Slowly falling,
Slowly fading,
Black….
Copyright 2008, Brandon Moore.
2 comments:
i like this but it still loses me a little. it's not bad though. :) good job hun. :D
Where does it lose you?
its supposed to be a abstract poem(more or less)
once again, thanks for the comments.
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