162 Words
By. Brandon Moore
I wake up each morning thinking of you,
I revel in my slumber as then I’m with you,
For when in deep slumber you’re closer to me
For when I am awake you are days away.
I long for that day, the one yet to come,
The day I can hold you,
Soon, that day will come.
And when that day comes I’ll get in my car,
I’ll drive for two days, for you are that far.
Its been but four years since I’ve felt your touch,
I long to embrace you, if only that day would come.
Things all around me remind me of you,
The lively sea green that are your eye’s,
The dark black sky is like your hair,
Ever flowing, and always there.
For now I will sleep, dreaming of you,
But I long to wake up, to wake to you,
To see you, to hold you,
To be with you…
Copyright 2008, Brandon Moore.
2 comments:
so far out of all the ones i've read this is my fave. :) it has a bit of rhyme and doesn't repeat too bad. it's not choppy and it's like a wave...slowly washing over everything that you feel. i like it. :)
This is actually the first poem that i have ever made, i must have thrown those in the wrong order....
thanks for the comment hon.
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